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If at first you can’t succeed, how about changing direction?

Wed ,09/01/2013
If at first you can’t succeed, how about changing direction?

I would really like to know what gets inside people heads at times when I read a book and then wonder, “How the hell did this ever get published?” I find it fascinating that people keep writing and keep writing having to know that their book, is well simply crap. Characters aren’t developed, the storyline is so tangled and jumbled you can’t follow it, the dialogue is dreadful and then to top it off, they write another book ’cause it is part of a series. Come on, really? I know that writing a book is not the easiest thing in the world to do, but I know that authors can do better than that! I guess the really scary part is that they don’t know its crap. Every author reads books, or at least they should and they know what is good and what isn’t, so why then do we have so much stuff written that is simply put on the shelves to make a buck and not entertain, because let’s face it, books are all about entertaining in this genre.

So when I ask the question “If at first you can’t succeed, how about changing direction?” it means simply this: look deep into the characters you developed. It all starts there, not with the plot or the setting, but with the characters. Sure if you are writing a thriller, you will have a hero and villain. If writing a mystery, you will have the detective (in many forms, from a florist to a real cop) and some sort of crime where everyone could do it and had the chance to do the crime. But the real important part is building up your characters from the beginning. You don’t have to spend a lot of time talking about what they are wearing, or how tall they are and their hair color. Frankly, who really gives a damn? That has 100% absolutely nothing to do with who they are as a person, so take the image out of the equation. What do you have left then? You have how they react in certain situations, how they become a ruthless bastard, how they obtain the skills they have, what gets under their skin, what makes them want to continue forward… I could go on and on, but I think you get the idea. Talking about what they look like with height, weight, hair color, shirt color, do they have a piercing, all that stuff is simply fluff that can be explained in other ways and a lot more interesting. This goes for ALL your characters in your book, not just your main character.

Secondary characters are just as important, if not more important than the couple of main characters you have in your book. What they do is put the ribbon on the package, or the tape on the wrapping, they bring your story together. Without really thinking about secondary characters, you end up with a present under the tree that looks like an open umbrella, not surprising anybody that is going to open that present. Research comes in many different forms, from getting the history of the city right or the curse of the tomb, to bringing your characters to life and how they act and how they got that way.

So when you are writing your story and come to a crossroad where you need to make a decision, ask yourself first if the road you traveled to get to this point has been successful, or do you need to double back and take a different road. Weaving through the maze of words that make up a book is something not to be taken lightly. Stop being stubborn and realize that maybe your book is simply crappy and be honest with yourself, it is then and only then, you become a writer that readers will be happy to support.

Why do we love Horror?? guest blogger: Heather Legg

Sat ,05/01/2013

Horror Collectibles: A Hobby or an Obsession?

 

Everyone needs a hobby. Some like a hobby as something to distract them from the day-to-day grind, something to do in their spare time or even as a social outlet. Almost anything can be a hobby, from collections to gardening to motorcycles. And if you are a collector, you can collect pretty much anything that strikes your fancy….even horror memorabilia.

 

What are horror collectibles?

 

So you can’t get enough of Nightmare on Elm Streetand you want a sweater like Freddy Krueger? You like to decorate in the genre of the Addams Family or Tim Burton. Well, it sounds like you’re into horror collectibles. These are all of those iconic items from the horror movies and shows we all know so well – Friday the 13th, Nightmare on Elm Street, Halloween, plus all the Tim Burton flicks like Corpse Bride and Sweeney Todd, and even anything to do with zombies, vampires, and any other creepy creature.

 

You can find websites devoted to horror collectibles and merchandise, items abound on eBay and Amazon, and there are whole communities of collectors out there who collect, trade, and share their beloved horror collectibles. Sure it’s an awesome subject for a collection, but what’s the difference between horror collectibles as a hobby and as an obsession?

 

You think it’s a hobby…

 

When you collect horror collectibles, whether all from a single movie (well, let’s say a single movie series, since you know how these things roll) or from the whole host of horror memorabilia, you can call it a hobby. Maybe you have a designated spot in your home to hang your Michael Myers mask or an area to house your collectibles. Sure, you may talk about it with your friends sometimes, even take some time on the weekends or spare time to shop for the stuff, go to a horror convention, or hang out online searching for more information and memorabilia.

 

You like other things, too. Your work interests you, and you enjoy hanging with friends even without horror collectible discussion (but it’s still okay to spend time on it!). You don’t need your horror fix every day, but your collectibles do bring you pleasure. Sounds like it’s still a hobby.

 

Could it be an obsession…

 

That small area you used to store your collectibles has gotten bigger and bigger; you’re finding you have less room for other things. Your home is starting to look a little too macabre, and people are starting to think of you as “that horror guy.” Your friends are getting a little tired of hearing you only talk about your horror collection, and they no longer want to see your newest acquisition, no matter how cool it is. Maybe you’re taking time at work to search for the latest and greatest horror addition, or you’re spending way too much money on the items – so much that you don’t have money to do other things, or worse, pay your bills. If these things are going on or you are using all of your time to improve your collection, to the point of not eating, sleeping, working, or socializing – this may be an obsession (no matter how cool horror stuff is).

 

Hobbies are great – they’re healthy and give people something to do that really interests them. Obsessions aren’t healthy – they consume people and are detrimental to their wellbeing. And if someone doesn’t like the idea that your collection is about horror stuff, that doesn’t mean it’s an obsession – it can still be a healthy hobby. It’s when it consumes you that it’s out of hand. Keep your horror collection to a hobby, and if you notice it’s getting out of hand, try to back away a little. If you can’t, it may be time to find a little help.

 

Heather Legg is a blogger who writes on family issues, healthy lifestyles, and how to find the right gutter guards.

New Year, New Blog, Same great people!!

Thu ,03/01/2013
2012 has come and gone and we are all still here, which is a good thing. However with a New Year come new ideas, new resolutions and this year I’ve decided to put my attention to the blog site and reading more books. Many of you don’t know that I don’t review that many books each year, actually I probably only read about five or six books a year from cover to cover. Thank god the magazine has a lot of reviewers that do read many, many books and give you, the readers all those wonderful reviews. So as I sit here and write this out, I’m listening to some music on my new “Soul” headphones that my wonderful wife got me for Christmas and I have football on with no sound, just watching. I’m one of those writers that need to have something going on in the background or I will go stir crazy. I just realized that I keep speaking in the first person and I’ve not even introduced myself to you, well does it really matter who I am, or what really matters is what I say? For this entry, you can just call me “Suspense” and leave it at that.
The number one question on every inspiring authors mind is “How do I get published?” I’m going to answer that very quickly and get on to a question that means something. You want to get published, write a kick ass story with great characters and solid plot. Let other people read it that will give you HONEST feedback, not a pat on the back for finishing a book saying how wonderful it is, knowing full well that they would never spend a dime on getting it and hoping you don’t send them an autographed copy of it for Christmas, because you had to publish it yourself. Every author, I don’t care who it is has to have people around them that will give them honest feedback.

Now to a real question, which in today’s day and age is very important to try and be seen by as many people as possible. “How can I get my book reviewed and featured?” Wow, I’m glad you asked me that question, because that is something I can help you out with. I’ve said it a hundred times and I’ll say it again for the hundred and first time. Writing a book is the easy part of this process, getting it read, reviewed, and sold are the difficult parts. Most authors don’t have a degree in marketing, and even if they do, that doesn’t mean much. Heck look at all the crappy commercials you see on T.V., just remember that millions of dollars and thousands of hours went into making that stupid thing, so don’t think that someone with a marketing degree is any better at getting their stuff read and distributed to fans any better than you. However, a lot of research and work have to go into getting your book read and hopefully featured and that should start BEFORE you finish the book. Spend a couple of hours a week finding blog sites that talk about your subject matter. If you are writing a mystery, don’t contact a paranormal blog site, hoping they will review your book because they won’t. Instead, search out book clubs, blog sites, radio shows, author fan sites, etc. that talk, read, and love mysteries.

Next, let’s take a magazine like, well Suspense Magazine. We cover the genres of suspense, thriller, horror, and mystery and all the subgenres that spin off of those major lines. However, when we get emails, we get a synopsis that is written on the back of the book and that is boring! Instead, you need to write a query like you would for an agent or publisher. When you look at the back of the book, that is written to sell the reader on buying the book, so you want to give them a cliff hanger of what is to come: will the hero make it out alive or will the killer succeed at his master plan. When you are looking for a review: so the hero is brought through a maze of challenges when the killer takes him on a ride through hell, but in the end the hero is able to weave himself through and ends up taking the killer down losing only a little bit of his sanity, but still keeping his family intact, or something like that. Remember that reviewers AREN’T buying the book, so don’t sell them on it that way, instead sell them on the characters, the plot, the beginning, the middle, and the end. It’s ok to give away the ending, or give details about how the hero loses his wife in a gun battle that ends up taking the killers life, but also his wife’s. Our magazine gets over 3000 books each year, yep 3000 and that doesn’t include the EBooks or the short stories, just in the mail. While we can’t review them all and many come unsolicited, we try our best to give every book some sort of look. Like many reviewers, they have read the same synopsis a hundred times. Yes, you have the best hero that is near the brink of death going up against the most intelligent villain ever written. Instead, you need to focus on the characters and don’t leave out the secondary ones as many times those are the ones that people will love or hate more than the main ones.

Do you get it yet? Have I made myself clear and given you some tips that you can actually use? Hopefully I have, but if not leave some comments or email us at info@suspensemagazine.com and we will try and expand a little further on what I’ve talked about here. I would say see you next time, but I’ll leave you in “Suspense” as to when or who that will be. “It’s Time to get your Fiction ON!!”

Green Lake Episode 2 Scene 2 “Dead Letters”

Tue ,04/12/2012

GREEN LAKE

EPISODE 2: DARKNESS RISING

Scene 2: “Dead Letters.”

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By John Raab & Donald Allen Kirch

4:00 AM – Sophia’s House:

Sophia woke to the sounds of sirens blasting into and passing her bedroom window.  There seemed to be a torrent of action going on down below and through the main street of Green Lake.  The panicked and carried voices of the local volunteer fire department invaded the sleepy woman’s senses, causing her to jump out of bed, naked.

She saw two fire engines and an ambulance racing down the street and beyond the city limits.  In good taste, she grabbed a sheet from the bed, covering herself.  Curious, she continued to watch, peering out her second story window.

“Oh, I hope it’s not another fire,” she whispered, softly moving hair from her eyes.

An unexplainable smile started to form within the corners of her mouth.

The whole town was in the middle of social chaos.

Yesterday, the Goodwin House burnt down and the events of the past few days had been quite disturbing to Green Lake.

Sophia giggled.

She walked back to her bed and sat down.  Closing her eyes, she dropped the sheet, allowing the moonlight to shower her body.  It was a remarkable feeling, and she enjoyed the moment.  Her hands caressed her breasts, and she lay back upon the mattress, thinking.

It was nice to see Michael again, and to have him back in Green Lake.  He had been the only man she truly loved.  She had been devastated when he went away to college, got married, and never came back to her.

“If only things had been different, Michael,” she mused, stopping her hands at her stomach.  She blinked, trying to fight back the tears.

She knew that if Michael would have stayed in town, she would be lying next to him right now, feeling the warmth of his body.  His strong hands would be touching her, and making her feel both wanted and alive!  They were quite young when they had fallen in love, but she couldn’t shake the belief that they were still meant to be together.

A dog started to bark, no doubt alarmed by the curious of the town.

Sophia had many opportunities to move on and find someone else, but Michael was her one and only.  He walked in her dreams and still held within his hands the better half of her heart.

“Well, I’m not going to let you go…this time.  No, sir,” Sophia whispered, promising herself.

She looked up at the clock on her nightstand.  It read “4:03 AM.”

She moaned.

She had to get up in an hour anyway, so she got dressed and went down stairs to make some coffee and to start her day.  Making a quick breakfast, and taking an even quicker shower, she appeared ready.  While eating, she turned on the TV, flipped through a few channels, and cursed why she even bothered to watch cable – all those channels and NOTHING was ever on!

“Time to get down to the business at hand,” she said, mockingly, as she started the task of getting the store open.

 

Sheriff Freeman’s House – 4:27 AM:

The Sheriff opened his right eye and stared at the ringing phone on his nightstand as if it were the enemy.  It was!  After the last couple days, he barely got enough sleep to keep from collapsing.

Moaning and bitching, he grabbed the damn thing.

“Hello?” he said in a tired voice.

Being woken up at the crack of dawn was not on his high list of things to do in the morning.

“Sheriff, we have a problem.” it was Doug.

“We fucking better have a problem for you to call me this early.  What is it?”

There was a slight pause on the other end of the line.

Freeman found himself rubbing the side of his head.  He was starting to get another damn headache.

“There is a fire brewing out at the Taylor Ranch,” Doug explained, his voice sounding shaky.  “I guess the whole place is burning.  Crews just got the call and are headed out there now.”

Freeman sat up in his bed.

“Doug, I’m on my way.  I’ll meet you out there.”

“Okay, boss.  There’s one more thing.”

“Jesus, what?”

“There was a letter delivered to the station with your name on it.”

Sheriff Freeman stopped trying to put on a uniform shirt, listening.  “And that’s primetime news.” he stated.

“Well, it was found taped to the front door just seconds before we got the call on the fire.”

Freeman was heading toward the bathroom to wake himself up.

“Did you open it and see who it was from?  Who brought it up there?”

“You want me to open it now?”

“No.  Let’s just let it sit on my desk for the rest of my life as a great unknown mystery,” Freeman sarcastically barked into the phone.  Almost immediately, after he said it, he felt regret for attacking Doug.  The deputy was just too damn honest for his own good.  “Go ahead!”

Freeman turned on the water and put the phone on his shoulder, holding it in place with his chin.  He took his hands and splashed some water on his face.  His head began to burn and he winced with a shot of pain that hit him like a bullet.

He screamed.

“You okay, boss?” Doug shouted on the other end of the line.

“I’m fine,” Freeman lied, “water was too damn hot.  Go on and read it.”

Freeman put more water on his face and turned off the faucet.  He looked at himself in the shaving mirror and shook his head with comedy.  The Sheriff noticed that his eyes were red, looking like someone who had smoked too much weed the night before, or was trying to get over one hell of a hangover.

“Hurry up, man,” Freeman barked into his phone.  “Don’t have all day, you know.”

He could hear Doug opening up the letter.

The deputy on the other end paused.

Freeman waited a couple seconds and then spoke again.

“Well, what does it say?  Freeman left his bathroom and grabbed both his uniform pants and duty belt.  He didn’t have time to take a shower, so in good conscience he glared hard at a spray deodorant can on his nightstand.

“Um, well…” Doug stammered, “It says this is just the beginning of our hell.”

“That’s it?” Freeman asked, putting on his pants.

“It also says that we are not to trust Michael Barrett.”

Freeman froze, allowing his pants to fall to the floor – one leg in, and one leg out.

Again, the Sheriff’s head filled with a fantastic pain.  So much so, that he cried out loud enough to drop his phone.  Rubbing the pressure points at his temples, Freeman had managed to control the wave of pain, allowing it to ebb to a tolerable level.

The pain left as quickly as it had come.

“Boss!  You okay?” Doug sounded like he was ready to rush over to Freeman’s house.  Silently, the Sheriff admired his faithfulness.

“Yeah, just a headache,” Freeman explained.  “What the hell is that suppose to mean?  That we cannot trust Michael Barrett?  Jesus, the man just lost his parents.”

“I don’t know.  I’ll bring it with me to the Taylor’s.”

“Good call, Doug.  Okay, I’m on my way.”

Both hung up.

Sheriff Freeman reached down and pulled up his pants.

It did not take him too long to put on the rest of his uniform.  Years of practice.  Green Lake may not have had all the problems of a major city, but there was no limit of domestic violence.  After a man got laid off from work, and had a few beers in him, anything was possible and often was.  He got a cup of coffee and headed out to his cruiser.

It was still dark, and the sun wouldn’t be up for another hour or so.  When he was awake, Freeman loved this time of the day.  It was still cool enough to enjoy, and most of the people weren’t around screwing up the scenery.

“Yep, looks like it’s going to be another boring d…” Freeman paused, mid-sentence.

Staring across the road, in front of his house, he thought he saw a hooded figure looking at him from behind an oak tree.

“Naw,” Freeman softly said, turning to unlock his car door.

He turned back to see who the figure was.

When he looked, the figure was gone.

As he opened the door to his car, a raven came from out of nowhere and landed upon the vehicle’s roof.  The bird squawked a high pitched noise, causing the man to almost have a heart attack.

“Goddamn!” He yelled, grabbing his chest in surprise.  He almost dropped the coffee he took with him from the kitchen.  “Get the hell out of here, you shit bag with feathers!” he said, trying his best to wave the raven off with his free hand.

The raven squawked at Freeman, almost daring the man to touch him.  It lowered its head, bowing at his command.  After a few seconds of hand waving, it finally got the message that it wasn’t welcome, and flew off; landing upon the oak tree the Sheriff had spotted the hooded figure hiding behind.

The Sheriff got in his car.

A letter was taped to his passenger’s seat.

The cream envelope had his name written on it in old script.  It was almost beautiful.

“What the..?”

The Sheriff looked around, as if expecting to see the person who had delivered it.

He opened it.

“MICHAEL BARRETT IS THE KEY…DON’T LET HIM LEAVE!” it read.

He flipped the one page of paper over and it was blank.  Nothing else was inside the envelope, and that was the only sentence on the page.

“What the hell is going on in this town?” Freeman’s voice was loud and irritated.

He turned on the ignition, backed out of his driveway, and headed out to the Taylor Ranch.

 

Roger Gentry’s Home – 6:00 AM:

Roger hit the alarm clock, knocking it off of his nightstand for the hundredth time.  He had never been a morning man.  Sitting up, late at night, drinking hadn’t been a great idea either.  Seeing Michael Barrett reminded him too much of the glory days, and it had gotten to him.  He had felt bad about bolting out on an old friend like that, but the feelings came too strong, and he needed to forget.  Drinking was the only way to do that, and he knew that if he had wanted to do it right, he would have to be alone.  So, he made a mental note to hook up with Michael later.

“Better get up and get my ass to the shop,” he coached to himself, slowly pulling the covers off.  “Ralph hates it when I’m late.”

He sat up, rubbed his eyes, and went to the bathroom.

These things took time.

Afterwards, he grabbed his keys and headed out the door in the same clothes he had slept in.  What the hell?  People expected him to stink anyway – he was a laborer, after all.

He smiled.

He had just enough time to stop off at Sophia’s and get a cup of coffee and a donut.

He walked into the general store seeing Sophia behind the counter waiting on a couple of workers from the Miller’s Mill, the only grain refinery left in the county.  It was the main employment for many of the people of Green Lake, with about 50 employees.  The two men grabbed their morning pick me ups and headed past Roger.

“Morning fellows,” he huffed, heading up to the counter.

The exiting men just grumbled.

“Good morning, Sophia,” Roger winked, “You got some fresh coffee?”

Sophia was looking as beautiful as ever.  Roger, along with almost every man, married or not, wanted to be with her, if only for an hour.

“Sweetie, of course I do.”

Roger’s eyes scanned the woman’s breasts.

Sophia caught his gaze, smiling.

She walked a couple feet to her modern coffee machine, a fancy system she had some big city boys install a few months ago, so that she could brew up some gourmet java.  Roger, admittedly, loved it.  He liked it black and strong, and she made the best dam brew in the city.

“Things seem to be jumping out of town today,” Sophia stated, pouring out the fresh coffee.

Roger only grunted.  He was too busy looking at the woman’s ass.

“They should make tight jeans in the morning a misdemeanor,” Roger softly said to himself.

“What was that?”

“Oh, nothing,” Roger’s face flashed red.  He picked up a donut from a box that was sitting on the counter.  Just one of the things Sophia did for the blue collar crowd in Green Lake.  She always made sure she had a couple dozen fresh donuts delivered every morning to see the men off to work.

Small towns had those simple touches, and this was something her family had done for decades.

“When are you going to let me take you on a date?” Roger asked, almost surprised at his own forwardness.  Perhaps it was the sight of Sophia in her tight jeans that brought it out of him.

Sophia placed his coffee on the counter, arching up an eyebrow in surprise.

“Well, now, that is a tempting proposition,” she smiled, leaning forward just enough to give the man a peak at her bosoms.  “Ask me again, tomorrow.”

Roger sipped his coffee.

“You said that the last time.  I can take a hint.”

Sophia patted the man’s hand as she took his money for the coffee and donut.

“It isn’t that I wouldn’t like to go out with you, I really just do not need to complicate my life right now.  I’m very happy being single.”

Roger looked down at his coffee, sad.

“Well if you ever change your mind, let me know.”

“Sweetie, you will be the first to know,” she said with a wink.  Sophia was good at teasing the men of Green Lake.  Never having actually slept with any of them, but that didn’t stop them from trying.  Most already thought she was having a secret affair with Doctor Holder, anyway.

“I’ll hold you to that, one day, darling.”  Roger said, walking out the front door.

When Sophia was alone, her pleasant face was instantly replaced with one of blank emotions.  She walked out from behind her counter and stood in front of the main entrance, looking out at those who passed her by.  The town was waking up and Main Street was getting busy, well busy for Green Lake, with cars, most of them headed to the mill to work.

“This is my town,” she huffed.  Her eyes seemed to burn with an inner conviction.  “Things are going to…change.”

Sophia clenched her hands together, into fists, and had started to chant.  Her fingernails buried themselves into her palms, causing driblets of blood to rain upon the floor.

“He is…mine!”

Across the street, at Harmon’s Hardware, Jack Harmon had arrived to open for the business day.  He saw Sophia through the door and waved.

Sophia waved back, hoping no one could see the blood coming from the palms of her hands.

Jack put the store keys in the door and opened them.

“Now…” Sophia whispered.

It happened so fast that Jack couldn’t get out of the way.

A red truck came blasting down the street, from out of nowhere, and barreled into the hardware store, taking Jack with it.

Main Street became a chorus of terrified screams.

Green Lake Episode 2 Scene 1 “Encounter at the Hangman’s Inn”

Mon ,05/11/2012

GREEN LAKE

By John Raab & Donald Allen Kirch

EPISODE TWO: DARKNESS RISING

Scene 1: “Encounter at the Hangman’s Inn…”

The Green Lake Hotel was a jewel in the town’s skyline.  Her style competed with the most successful comfort lines, and still came out on top of her game.  She was a grand lady and held happy memories with both customers and employees.  She had become a respected tradition.  Like all traditions, however, she had her dark origins.

The Green Lake Hotel started out like most respectful establishments in “the West.” – She had once been a brothel.  The original owners, realizing that their share of the gold rush would not be in mining, thought it better to take the money from those obtaining their fortunes – that was where the true power in money lay.  So, as those who sought gold came to California, they stopped at her open doors, drinking her whiskey, gambling within her halls, and sleeping with her hired women.  Yes, the Green Lake Hotel had been a great place to spend, drink, and sleep for a buck!

As times mellowed, and laws became apparent, things had to tone themselves down.

Over the years, the hotel had some changes, but still carried twenty rooms and bar on the bottom floor.  The bar, “The Hangman’s Inn,” had always been a popular place to take one’s date on a Friday night, being transformed a little more with HDTV’s and sports, capturing a younger crowd.

“The Hangman’s Inn” served the normal bar food, burgers and fries, with the cook Henry Gomez, putting some Mexican flair on the menu also.  There was still some “original” culture left in Green Lake, but most went away with time, once California was no longer a Mexican territory.  Still, food was not the same if Henry was not there to serve it.  Natives, who learned that Henry was “out”, would simply not eat – he was that good.

The hotel and inn was owned by Hank and Betsy Young.

The Youngs were among the original covenant that had started Green Lake, and their name was just as cherished as their hotel.  Once, they were all honored to have the establishment featured in a documentary on The Travel Channel.  The buzz from that film caused a boom in Green Lake tourism – if one could call 200-more families a year a boom.

Michael Barrett took his first date from high school here.

He liked it.

Rubbing his head, feeling a headache coming on, he walked into the main lobby just before closing time, and smiled softly.

Some things never changed.

“Thank Christ,” he softly mused.

Betsy was standing at the front desk, with a smile on her face, and perked up when she saw Michael.  She hadn’t seen him in years, but still remembered him like it was yesterday.

All of the town natives seemed to have that certain ability to remember who was an outsider and who was not.  That aura stuck with a Green Laker no matter how much time had passed since they had last been back.

Michael heard the squawking of a nearby bird.

Was it a raven?

“Michael Barrett, so good to see you again,” Betsy beamed, her hands shaking with surprise.  “I’m just so sorry to hear about your parents, what a tragedy.  You and your family are in our prayers.”  Betsy paused, looking around, curious.  She appeared to be expecting more people to show up.  “Are you alone?  Where is your family?”

Michael wanted to say something, but only managed a low sigh.

She walked around the counter to give Michael a hug.

“Thank you so much Mrs. Young,” Michael finally was able to say, hugging her.  “To say it’s a shock is an understatement.  I still don’t know if I fully understand what happened.  My family will be coming in the next couple of days.  I flew out here alone hoping you’d have a room open.”

Betsy kindly slapped Michael on his wrist.

“Of course we do!”

Betsy walked back behind the counter and grabbed a room key from the wall.  The Green Lake Hotel never upgraded to the electronic keycards you find in high-dollar resorts, but that was the friendly thing about her.  The phone calls were still checked and local calls would cost .50 cents.  Guest still had to sign the log stationed upon the main counter, near the old-fashioned cash register.

“Here you go, sir,” Betsy smiled, handing him a key.

“Room Seven?”

“Room Seven,” she confirmed.

“My first trip back and you give me the keys to the haunted room?”

“Well, how else are we going to get another spot on a big city documentary?  I hear ghost shows are all the rave, now.”

Michael shook his head, fondly.  Betsy always did have good business sense.

“Just sign the guestbook and you can pay either cash or credit.  Still just thirty dollars a night.  If you need anything from Hank or I, just ask.  Your parents were good people.  I would talk with your mother often at church.  Such a lovely lady.”

Michael took the key, put it in his pocket, and signed the guestbook.

“Hank still working in the bar?  I could really use a drink and some food.”

“Yep.  He hangs in there most of the time.  If the place caught fire, I think he would stay wondering if the firefighters would want something to drink, while putting out the blazes.”

Both found themselves laughing, forcibly.

“It’s good to see some things never change.” Michael said.

Betsy’s expression changed to more concern than anything else.  Had Michael inadvertently hurt her feelings?  She began to muddle around trying to look busier than she was.  Michael had hit some kind of nerve, but he had no idea what that was.  However with the sudden change of her expression, Michael decided to end the conversation and head up to his room.

“Okay, I’m going to go up to my room now.  You take care, and I will make sure to let you know when my parents’ service will be.”

“Thank you, Michael.  Towels are changed every day, so just leave them on the floor.  Breakfast is in the inn and starts serving at 7:00 am.”

“Sold…American,” Michael winked, walking away from the counter.

Michael took his one bag and headed outside to walk down the row of rooms.  There were ten rooms on the bottom and ten on the top.  From outside it looked like the hotel was pretty much vacant, which was not surprising.

There was a weird feeling Michael noticed as he continued his walk.

He was being watched.

Michael paused, looking around.

He saw no one.

“I know you’re there,” he whispered, glaring out into the night.

A distant sound of a car starting and taking off could be heard.

Michael opened his hotel room, which looked like something straight out of the 1950′s with the furniture and bed.  It had one dresser, with an outdated 19-inch TV set, and a queen sized bed with two pillows and a gold comforter.

“The haunted room,” he mused, dropping his bag inside next to the door.  “The only thing frightening is the fact that people keep renting this.”

The haunted room was just a local curiosity.  Back in ’74, a family of six stayed here one night, and was killed by a runaway prisoner, who had happened to have spotted them traveling down the road, trying to get away from the State Police.  The killer was a serial murderer, who claimed to have been a Satan Worshiper and disciple of Charles Manson.  While hiding in the room, he killed the children in front of the parents, then raped and killed the wife, while making the husband watch the whole thing.  The sight caused the unfortunate man to go crazy.  In his ultimate evil, the runaway spared the husband’s life.  When caught, he was asked, “Why?”  The criminal stated that, “he needed a legacy.  Someone to tell his story.”  The husband who survived, lives at the local crazy house, silent, glaring off into a darkened room, drooling on himself – hasn’t said a word since.

After that, business at the hotel slumped for a while.  People avoided Green Lake with a passion.  People, however, soon forget.  They came back, and the room was rented.

That’s where the “haunting” came into the legend.

People would leave the room in the middle of the night, claiming that “someone” was in there with them.  They would wake, seeing a strange tall man, dressed in black, and wearing sunglasses at night, softly smiling down upon them as they slept.  Terrified, they would reach for the lights, turning them on, discovering that they were all completely alone.

Most would check out that night.

Room Seven…was a legend in Green Lake.

“Lucky me,” Michael huffed.

Next to the bed was a nightstand with an old style clock radio, the one where the numbers flipped inside.  Michael picked up his bag and placed it on his bed and entered the bathroom.  He turned on the water and put his hands under the faucet.  He threw some water on his face, splashing himself.  Blinking the water out of his eyes he stared at his reflection in the mirror.

“Oogah, boogah,” he mockingly whispered to himself.

The lights in the room flicked on and off for a second, causing Michael to turn around and stare at the front door.  He had a sense that “someone” was either in the room or going to come in at anytime.

“Get a hold of yourself, old man,” he nervously laughed.

A few seconds passed and Michael turned himself back to the mirror and grabbed a towel hanging from the rack and wiped his face off.  The lights flickered again, only this time much faster and lasted longer.  The TV then turned on by itself and Michael walked the few feet to look at the curious device.

“What’s going on here?”

On the screen was white snow and Michael grabbed the remote from the nightstand and changed the station.  It stopped on Channel 7, with the nightly news on.  Something had happened on the highway, as there was a five car accident only 10 miles outside of town, not too far from the turn off to “The Silver Witch Mine,” heading down to Sacramento.

“…a five car pileup on the 99 freeway and the reports are that there might be multiple fatalities.  Police have closed the stretch of highway between Anderson Crossing and Yuba Town Road.  If you have to travel on that section of road, we suggest you take the 5 freeway or Old Gold Rush Bridge.  We will continue to keep you updated as we hear things.”

The news center’s cameras panned several crashed cars and EMT’s caring for wounded people.  One car seemed to be on fire, causing a few local firemen some problems.  In one obscure camera angle, a tall man, dressed in black, and wearing sunglasses seemed to look right at Michael, smile at him, and then…gone.

“And…we would like to give a very special hello to Michael Barrett…Welcome home, Michael.”

Michael’s heart stopped.

“What the…?”

He stared at the screen, but the news story had changed over to the weather.

There is no way I just heard what I had heard, Michael thought.

His body was filled with goose bumps as his heart finally started back up again.  Sweat began to flow down the side of his face.  He quickly turned off the TV, grabbed his keys and left the room.  He took his cell phone from his pocket and called his wife.

There was a distant ringing in his ear.

“Hello, honey, how are you?”

He found himself smiling, recognizing Kathy’s wonderful voice.

“Hey, baby, I’m good.  I just needed to hear your voice, that’s all.”

“Oh, I miss you,” Kathy seemed to beam through the phone at Michael.  “How is it going?”

Michael locked his door.

“Do you think you and the kids could possibly leave tomorrow and come down?”

“Sure honey, everything okay?”

“Oh, yeah.  I just really need the help.  Do you think you can change your plans?”

“Yep,” Kathy stated.  “I’ll call the airline right now and get out as soon as we can.  Love you.”

Michael found himself standing in front of “The Hangman’s Inn.”

“I love you.  Give the kids a kiss and hug from me.  Call me in the morning when you find out your plans, all right?”

“Sure thing, honey.  Are you sure everything is okay?  I’ve known you long enough to know your lying to me, you know.”

“No, everything is fine.  I just didn’t realize how tough this would all be.  I thought I would be able to handle it.”

There was a long pause on the line.

Did Michael hear someone else talking in the background?  Must have been one of the kids.

“Okay, then we will see you tomorrow.”

“Great!” Michael said.  “Well, I’m going to get something to eat and then go to bed.  It’s been a long one, as you can imagine.  Love you, babe.”

“Love you.  Go get some rest.”

Michael waited, wishing to hear Kathy hang up first.

The little talk helped Michael focus more.  He felt better.  He needed to have his family near him.  He thought that he was going crazy and not knowing really anyone in town made him feel like an outsider.  Sure, there were the familiar faces, but Green Lake had changed.

The smell of food coming from the kitchen started to make his stomach do cartwheels.

Michael walked into the inn, which had a separate entrance from the hotel, now closed.  Betsy put the sign on the door and would not be back until 6:00 am.

“Finally, civilization,” Michael huffed, smelling the smoke, beer, and food.

The inn was different than Michael remembered it.  Walking in and having his first sip of beer with his dad when he was ten.  An overwhelming feeling of sadness came over him, thinking back to those memories.

“What happened, dad?”

Michael scanned the room, which housed ten tables and another fifteen stools at the bar counter.

“Well, there he is.” Michael smiled.

Hank was behind the bar washing some glasses and did not notice Michael walking in.  The tables were empty, and there were four people sitting at the bar.  Three were together watching the Oakland A’s game on TV playing the White Sox’s, and at the far end sat a middle aged man with a beer in front of him and an empty shot glass.

Michael took a seat one stool over from the man sitting alone.

Wearing what looked like an auto mechanic’s uniform, Michael could see when the man picked up his beer, his hands were dirty and his hat was decorated with a “Peterbuilt” label.  The hat was purposely pulled down to cover his eyes.

The man did not look over when Michael sat down.

Michael turned his attention to the man working behind the bar.

“Hello, Hank.  Long time no see.”

Hank stopped what he was doing and looked Michael’s way.  When he saw Michael he immediately put a smile on his face.  He grabbed his towel and was wiping his hands as he spoke.

“Michael Barrett!  Betsy told me you checked into the hotel.  Sorry about your parents.  Fucking damn shame.  The cops got anything yet?”

Michael had determined that the actual details of his parents’ death were not known to the town, just that they had been killed; at least the Sheriff spared him that, by not leaking out that information just yet.

“Thanks, Hank.  You think I can have a light beer on tap and is the kitchen open for some food?  Haven’t had a bite to eat all day.”

“Sure thing.  What do you want?”

“Let’s make it easy…burgers and fries.”

“Henry went home, but I’ll go back there and whip it up.”

Hank put Michael’s beer in front of him and walked back through two doors on the right side of the bar.  The stranger that was sitting close to Michael looked over and spoke to him.

“Michael Barrett, back in town.  Sorry for your loss, man.”

Michael looked over not remembering who the guy was, but he didn’t have a good look at him, since his hat was still pulled down over his eyes.

“Thanks.  Do I know you?”

Roger Gentry looked over and pulled his hat up showing his face.  Roger was a teammate of Michael’s on the football team.  The two of them were pretty close in high school and when Roger got a scholarship to play for Georgia Tech, the two lost touch.  Roger never made it in school, getting into trouble and injuries, caused him to leave after two years and come back to Green Lake.  Now he worked for Ralph at the auto shop.  Roger always was good with cars, basically rebuilding the 1965 Chevelle he drove in high school.

Michael almost chocked on his beer.

“Holy shit, Roger!  Roger Gentry, great to see you.  What are you doing back in Green Lake?”

“Shit happens, Michael, and shit stays the same, you’ll find that out.  Anyway, maybe I’ll see you around.”

Roger took the last drink of his beer and laid a twenty on the counter and headed for the door.

“Wait a second,” Michael said, grabbing for his old friend’s arm.  “What are you talking about?  Come on back, I’ll buy you another beer.”

“No thanks gotta run.”

Right then the other three guys at the bar started to yell, as the A’s got a walk off home run, and beat the White Sox 6-5.  Michael was distracted when the roar of the guys went up, that when he turned back he saw the door closing and Roger leaving.

“Roger?”

Michael jumped from his chair and headed to the door.  As he opened it he almost knocked over Sophia Wren, who was headed in at the same time.  Michael saw Roger’s tail lights head up the road over Sophia’s shoulder.

“Hello, Michael, in a hurry?”

Things turned serious.

Michael looked down at Sophia.  She was as beautiful as ever.

“Hello, Sophia,” Michael finally said, uneasy.  He avoided eye contact.

Michael and Sophia dated in high school and planned to possibly get married, but when Michael left for school, Sophia said she couldn’t leave her family, knowing that she would take over the general store.  Michael and Sophia said good bye and hadn’t spoke until now.

“Back in Green Lake, I see,” Sophia’s eyes glared hard back into his.

Michael knew that he would probably run into Sophia at one point in his visit, but didn’t think he would feel this way when he saw her.

The man felt a subtle fear…and he could not explain why.

Guest Blogger Al Natanagara “Why Do We Love Horror!”

Thu ,18/10/2012

Why Do We Love Horror?

 

Fava beans.

 

What image came to mind when you read those two words?

 

While it is possible that a few of you pictured a mouth-watering plate of Ful Medames, the overwhelming majority of you had, “…and a nice Chianti,” on the tips of your tongues as your mind’s eye saw a murderous Anthony Hopkins leering from behind a wall of bulletproof acrylic.

 

Horror movies are mainstream entertainment and a mainstay in world culture. Why do we love to be scared out of our wits?

 

Shrunken Heads

 

Mental health professionals have come up with a variety of explanations for the love of horror, from the simple, “It’s a way to get out our aggressions without hurting anyone,” to more complex theories involving various bodily parts such as the amygdala, a section of the brain that plays a role in regulating emotions and–coincidentally–is a well-known zombie delicacy.

 

There is no consensus among the metaphoric head-shrinkers as to the causes of horror fandom, nor is there agreement upon whether or not viewing horror movies has a positive, negative, or neutral effect upon an individual’s well-being. Perhaps there are no definitive answers, as there are too many reasons why people enjoy being frightened, just as each person is affected differently by such films.

 

The Masochists

 

There are horror fans who–even as adults–can’t sit through a half-hour of Goonies without curling into a fetal ball, sobbing, and sucking a soothing thumb. Despite the difficulty of sitting through films that others would consider mild, they persist. Do their brains crave a release of chemicals? Are they trying to prove to themselves or others that they can conquer their fears? Perhaps they are subconsciously seeking ways in which to deal with their fears surrounding real violence in their lives or feelings of hopelessness about world events.

 

The Sadists

 

There are those who are the first in line for the latest offerings from Miike, Roth, and Wan. They view scenes of abject brutality with eyes wide opened and lips curled upward with glee; they leave the theater pumped up on an adrenaline high. To them, The Human Centipede is as frightening as Green Eggs and Ham.

 

Are they likewise addicted to the chemicals that ooze from their brains as they witness savage human butchery? How can they possibly enjoy “torture porn”? Do they place themselves in the shoes of the killer or the victim? Do these films desensitize fans or otherwise cause an emotional change that makes them less compassionate or empathetic toward others?

 

The Humanity

 

There are so many questions, and not enough answers. Since there is no incentive forHollywoodto stop producing horror movies, it’s a certainty that they will remain a staple of the multiplex. The only answer we have is this: Keep asking the questions. If you are a concerned parent, ask your children how scary images affect them. If you are a fan, ask yourself how your interest in horror affects your relationships. If you are someone who is easily frightened, ask yourself if a few hours of getting the bejeezus scared out of you might help you overcome your fears.

 

Al Natanagara is a writer, journalist, and blogger whose career includes stints with ZDNet, CNet, CBS, LexisNexis, and Law Enforcement. He has written about topics ranging from child safety to sharpening hunting knives; from the best violent driving games to purchasing car insurance.

Guest Blogger Stephen Jay Schwartz “Empty Gloves”

Fri ,05/10/2012

“It’s smokey, I think.”

“To me, it’s a burnt, sweet smell,” I say.

“It’s amazing how strong it is,” he says. Tyson runs his hand through his hair and I know he’s imagining the sweet, burnt smell coming off on his fingers.

Fingers.

We saw a bowl of them at the Coroner’s Office. Blackened, dehydrated. Jose, the Forensic Identification Specialist, had been working the fingers every hour of the past few days. They’d come off a man who’d been found locked inside a cargo container. No one knew who he was, and it was Jose’s job to rehydrate the man’s fingertips and “rebuild” the prints. He had managed to remove a thin, rubber-like layer of skin from one of the man’s thumbs, creating what looked like one of those fake magician thumbs used for special card tricks. Except this one wasn’t a fake.  He stuck his own thumb into the “thumb-sleeve” and demonstrated how he was able to make a print.

I looked at Tyson for a reaction, but Tyson played it cool.

I’d been in this room before. It was a few years ago, when I was writingBOULEVARD, my first novel. I had managed to get an interview with the Chief Coroner Investigator and he gave me a tour of the L.A. Coroner’s Office as research for the book. Although I’d already written my coroner scenes, I knew I hadn’t done the boots-on-the-ground research required to get it right.

What I learned on that first tour was that seeing dead bodies wasn’t what I thought it would be. I figured I’d watch an autopsy, vomit, then pass out. What I discovered, and I’ve written it this way in the novel, is that there was no place in my brain to process the things I saw before me. Each image, each body on the table, each open cavity, seemed to carve a new place in my brain to store the information it contained.

And the bodies, they weren’t people. They were empty gloves, left behind when the soul slips them off.

That first visit had a profound effect on me and when I returned home I rewrote my coroner scenes top-to-bottom. Now the scenes were real, and they reflected the truth of what I saw.

That was a few years ago. My memory, being what it is (random electrical charges passed from one synapse to the next in a slowly eroding brain), I’ve lost many of the details of that day. I’ve been wanting to go back, if only to recapture the sense of awe and humility and mortality I felt. The fact is, I’ve been needing to go back for quite some time.

I’ve known Tyson Cornell since he reviewed Boulevard for Publishers Weekly’s Galley Talk. He was the author event coordinator for L.A.’s Book Soup, where he’d worked for something like fourteen years. After Vroman’s purchased Book Soup, Tyson lost his job then reinvented himself as the top independent author promoter in Los Angeles. His company, Rare Bird Lit, handles the L.A. press tours for authors like James Ellroy, Chuck Palahniuk and scores of others. If you want to see an impressive client list, check out his website. He also opened a publishing division, Rare Bird Books, with the imprints Barnacle Books and Vireo Books.

Tyson is always game for new experiences. When I decided to get an armband tattoo commemorating my publishing deal with Tor-Forge, Tyson said he wanted in. We got tattoos together. It was my first tattoo and Tyson’s twentieth. Tyson likes to accumulate experiences. Anything new and different excites him. Kim Dower, my publicist for Boulevard and Beat, once told me that she had to leave a meeting with Tyson to get a pre-scheduled pedicure. Tyson joined her, because he’d never seen anyone get a pedicure before. It was an experience he needed to have.

One day I was invited to attend a lavish party and fundraiser in Malibu forWriters in Treatment, an organization dedicated to helping writers afford treatment for their addictions. My invite was sponsored by an organization called The Center for Healthy Sex. I could bring a guest, so I invited Tyson.

We sat at a table that had little place-settings with our names on them, and under our names was written the title, The Center for Healthy Sex. Everyone assumed we represented the organization. We didn’t say anything to dispel the myth. At one point Tyson started talking about his new tattoo, getting everyone interested in checking it out. He opened his shirt and revealed the words tattooed across half his chest: “SEX IS NOT THE ANSWER, IT’S THE QUESTION. YES IS THE ANSWER.”

A famous quote from Bob Crane, apparently, and Tyson had to have it inked across his chest. I’m not sure how well we represented The Center for Healthy Sex that night. Then again, it might have been exactly the kind of message they wanted to convey.

When I started talking about a return trip to the Coroner’s Office, Tyson’s ears pricked-up. He asked if he could tag along. I couldn’t think of a better co-conspirator for the job.

The Chief Coroner Investigator was again very gracious with his time. He gave us a comprehensive, two-hour tour of the facility, explaining every facet of what the Coroner’s Office does and how it benefits the community. The Department of the Coroner is responsible for the investigation and determination of the cause and manner of all sudden, violent, or unusual deaths in the county of Los Angeles. It is also responsible for determining the identity of all bodies under its care.

 

The facility has changed a bit since my first visit. It is undergoing a major renovation to improve and update the offices, labs and autopsy rooms. As we walked through the halls we saw holes in the ceiling where tiles had been removed, revealing the skeletal joists and silvery ducts above. Walls and ceilings were encased in opaque plastic, not unlike the plastic used to wrap the hundreds of bodies we saw in the morgue’s brand new Crypt.

 

When I took my first tour, the Crypt, or Cooler, was about half the size of your average Starbucks and filled top-to-bottom with bodies wrapped in white plastic sheets. The new Crypt is the size of a warehouse and, if you replaced the human bodies with wooden crates it would remind you of the scene at the end of the first Indiana Jones movie. It’s kept at a chilly 35 degrees Fahrenheit; much cooler than the previous Crypt, which rarely dipped below 50.

 

I’m quite aware that my description of this experience sounds a little procedural. My intention in writing this post was to re-examine my feelings about viewing dead bodies. The reason I took the tour was to push myself to face the thing we all fear, the thing that drives me to ponder everything I’ve ever pondered. I wanted to poke the part of me that might have fallen asleep.

 

The profound effect I experienced after my first tour eludes me. Maybe I’m still in shock – my tour was just this morning, after all. Perhaps, as my twelve-year old son tells me, the images of death are waiting to populate my dreams tonight. I wouldn’t be surprised if this was the case; I’ve been known to experience post traumatic stress days or weeks after witnessing a tragic event.

 

And the things I saw today were definitely gruesome, conjuring images of films like Re-Animator, Alien and The Texas Chainsaw Massacre. I saw numerous autopsies being performed, saw bodies open and upended, with empty cranial cavities and chunks of skull on the side. I saw a woman’s body unrolled all about her, a medical examiner’s arms set deep inside her small frame, while two masked and gowned homicide detectives took notes beside them. I saw a man baked from fire, the flesh on his arms colored red and yellow like the fire itself, skin rippling off bone, fingers missing but for the burnt nubs of the middle knuckles that remained. I saw victims of car accidents, suicides, homicides.

 

I saw one tiny drop of what the over two hundred employees of the Los Angeles Department of Coroner see every day of the year except one – Christmas. The only day they have off.

 

And maybe that’s why I didn’t vomit and faint. I was aware that these people came to this place all the time, that this was their job. Three hundred bodies in the Coroner’s Office every day. This death was their life. The least I could do was take a sympathetic, if objective, look at the world through their eyes.

 

After the tour, Tyson and I went to a cafe to share our experiences. We were all-too aware of the smell that permeated our clothes, hair, and skin. A smell set so deep that nothing could displace it.

 

“You still smell it?” I asked him on the phone at the end of the day.

 

“Yeah, it’s heavy. I had to change my shirt.”

 

“I keep thinking everyone is looking at me,” I said. “Wondering what it is about me they want to avoid.”

 

When I go home I kiss my wife and she takes a step back, her eyes open wide.

 

“Straight to the shower,” she says, then points at the spot on the floor where I am expected to drop my clothes. She tells me to gather some quarters for the laundry I’ll be doing tonight.

In the shower, I use a half-bottle of shampoo and a full bar of soap.

Clean, now, and to the rest of the world I seem fine.

But still, I smell it. It’s not on me, it’s in me. Maybe tonight, in my dreams, I’ll see the things I wouldn’t face with my open eyes today.

Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray the Lord my soul to keep…

 

this blog was published with permission from Stephen Jay Schwartz.

“Green Lake” Episode 1 Scene 6 “The Homecoming”`

Wed ,05/09/2012

Episode 1: Scene 6

The Homecoming

 

Freeman entered the sheriff’s office feeling a little sick. He eyed the restroom, hoping that it wasn’t that kind of feeling. It wasn’t. Inspecting the fire at the Goodwin House had caused his stomach to tie itself in a few knots.

“Sheriff,” Doug said, walking up to him.

“Yep,” was all Freeman could bring himself to say.

The sheriff tried to remain calm.

He pulled out a new snack bag of cookies and began eating.

“The phone records you requested will be on your desk later today,” the deputy beamed, flipping through his papers. “The judge signed the court order and it was faxed over to the phone company about twenty minutes ago.”

“Uh-huh,” Freeman said, chewing a cookie.

The sheriff rubbed his temples. He was starting to get a headache.

He hadn’t told anyone about the dreams he was having, or that each seemed to be coming true. It was really starting to bother him, and eating the cookies was the only thing he could do to keep himself from breaking down and falling to the floor. The fire investigation had lasted longer than he had first anticipated, so his appointment with the Doc had to be postponed.

Freeman put one of his hands in his pockets to keep it from shaking.

“Boss?” Doug asked, squinting his eyes in study. “You okay?”

“Bad batch of cookies,” Freeman tried to bluff.

Doug flipped through more pages, not at all willing to challenge.

“Also heard from Ralph about the Barrett house.”

“Oh?”

“Ralph said that termites were not present and had no theory as to why the house is crumbling down around everybody. The house is basically a hollow hulk. He went on to say that in all his years he’s never seen deterioration quite like this one. Strange.”

“At least,” Freeman concluded.

Both officers seemed to run out of steam and found themselves stuck in the middle of a silent and awkward moment. After a few beats, Doug closed his files.

“Well, I’ll be in my office should something come up,” Freeman added, walking off.

“Okay, boss.”

Life in a small town.

Freeman flopped into his desk chair, throwing his hat on a nearby rack. He smiled, realizing that he had made the hat hook in one try. At least something “good” was happening to him.

A knock interrupted the moment.

“Sheriff?”

The visitor was a tall man, standing over six feet. His hair was a full gray and his face showed his age of sixty-seven.

Freeman smiled.

“Father Nelson! Please, come in.”

Father Nelson was the priest in charge of the Green Lake Catholic Church, the oldest church in the city. The priest had a slim build with piercing blue eyes.

“Hope that I am not bothering you, Sheriff,” Father Nelson smiled.

“Not at all. Please come in and take a seat.”

Doug tapped on the door, realizing that he had walked into the middle of a meeting. Silently, he placed a sheet of paper on the desk and walked out.

Freeman glanced at the paper as he shook the priest’s hand.

They were the records he had requested from the phone company.

Both men sat, not really knowing where to start.

“Rough day,” Freeman stated, finally breaking the silence.

“Not on my lists of favorite things to do, that’s for sure,” Father Nelson added.

“Father, I would like to go off subject here and . . .”

Another knock at the door.

Freeman rolled his eyes, irritated.

“Boss?”

Doug peeked in.

“What?” Freeman softly demanded.

“Michael Barrett is here.”

Both the sheriff and priest looked at each other.

“Show him in, please. Father, could you stay? Might need your help with this one.”

“Certainly,” the priest shook his head.

Michael Barrett hadn’t changed that much since last seen by those in Green Lake. Most recognized him right off. However, he carried an aura that detached him from the others. Although most people smiled and were happy to see him, an instant awkwardness couldn’t be explained. The well wishes and sympathy were too perfect . . . too . . . forced.

The three men stood in the office, not knowing who should start up the conversation.

Michael spoke first, after the initial hellos.

“Okay, Sheriff, what the hell is going on here? No offense, Father.”

Father Nelson waved the crudeness away as all took a seat.

Freeman had an urge to reach for another cookie, but curbed the idea.

“I know this is tough to hear, but your father shot your mother and then killed himself. We found no evidence of foul play.”

Michael closed his eyes, holding back.

Neither onlooker knew how to comfort.

“You know as well as I do that is impossible,” Michael finally stated, his voice almost below a whisper. Tears started to form within his eyes. His voice became louder. Shaky. “You guys aren’t doing your job. Did you call the State Police in on this?”

“It was the State Police that made the findings,” Freeman’s face turned stern. He didn’t like the idea of being told he was not doing his job. Especially when it came from a Barrett. “Listen, Michael, I know that we never really got along well when you were here, but I have asked Father Nelson to join us on this one. I know that this is a jagged pill to swallow.”

“A jagged pill?” Michael repeated, laughing sarcastically. “Yea, I’d fucking say that.”

Father Nelson took over.

This was his territory.

“Michael,” the priest said, placing a caring arm upon the man. “The facts are clear, this is what happened. Now, nobody knows what caused this tragedy, but we’ll get to the bottom of it.”

Michael wiped his eyes, taking a deep breath.

“I appreciate your attempt at comfort, but right now I’m not in the mood. Again, no offense, but I just got a call that my parents were killed, then I hear after my parents’ cell phone texted me that my father was the killer. I have to say that it is a little too much to swallow right now. And I refuse to believe that is what happened.”

Freeman started to thumb the paperwork from the phone company.

“Okay, I get you. I’m just laying out what the evidence says and what the official cause of death was. I admit this is more than a strange occurrence, but right now, there are no other suspects or even a motive. Unless a serial killer happened to stroll into town, this is how it will be.” Freeman turned the paper over so that no one could read it. “About your strange text, the report will be here in the morning. We will know more then.”

“When will I have my parents’ bodies?” Michael asked. “I have a lot of work to do. I also want to go to my parents’ house; since you’ve solved the case I assume it is no longer a closed crime scene.”

Freemen reached for a cookie.

Nelson raised his eyebrows, understanding the gesture.

Michael . . . didn’t get it.

“Well, that too is a problem,” Freeman explained, chewing. “Seems that your parents’ house is, well, not quite sure how to put this . . .”

“Well, you’ve been doing a bang up job passing out the news so far. Just tell me.”

“Okay. Their house is falling apart.”

Michael didn’t know what to say. He tried to let out a small laugh, but it stopped short once he realized that Freeman wasn’t joking. The Barrett house was one of the best-built homes in three counties. It had been featured in countless magazines over the last twenty years, and was almost a historical landmark.

“Falling apart, did I hear that right? What the hell does that mean?”

Freeman put his hands up for Michael to examine.

“I went over there earlier today and the kitchen counter . . . crumbled in my hands. Damndest thing I ever saw, Michael. I then put my finger through the wall, and part of that collapsed as well. When I left to lock the house door, this came off in my hand.”

Freeman reached into his top desk drawer and took out the Barrett house’s front doorknob. Throwing it on his desk, Michael reached down to pick it up.

Father Nelson leaned in, investigating for himself.

“Is this their doorknob? What? Did it just . . . fall off?”

“Can I see that?” Father Nelson asked.

Michael handed the thing over to the priest.

“I called Ralph Henry. You remember him, right? Well, I asked him to run over and check out the house. He says that the house is basically hollow, but no signs of termites. We are both a little mystified over this one.”

“Could this fact be a hidden motivation for Joe’s actions?” Father Nelson asked, placing the doorknob back on the desk. “Michael, could he have known the condition of his home? Could that have . . . ?”

“No. Dad was in good shape financially. He made sure that both he and Mom were covered in their retirement years. He took care of that house!”

Freeman shook his head, agreeing.

“Ralph said there would have been no way your parents could have lived there all these years and not known what was going on. He also said that the house is one good windstorm away from totally collapsing. Not safe at all. So, I don’t think that it’s a good idea for you to go over there right now.”

Michael bit his bottom lip, trying his best to control his emotions.

“I have to say I’m just a little speechless, here. This fucking day just keeps getting better every second.”

Freeman and Father Nelson, sadly, shared glances.

“Why don’t you go to your hotel and get some rest,” Freeman finally said, getting up from his desk. “It’s getting late and we will know more in the morning. I’ll find out from the coroner about your parents, but I would think you would be able to take possession of them tomorrow sometime. Bluefield’s Funeral Home has already been notified, since I thought you would want the service in town.”

“Yes,” Michael shook his head, “Dad even thought of that. He was a . . . careful man. Sheriff, I can’t accept this. Something is just not right.”

“I know,” was all Freeman could say.

Michael, not really wanting to talk anymore, decided that Freeman’s advice was worth taking. However, he had no intention of going to sleep. He had work to do. Things to look into.

“Tomorrow, then?” Michael asked.

“Tomorrow.” Freeman confirmed.

As Michael was headed out the door all three cell phones: Freeman’s, Father Nelson’s, and Michael’s all beeped at the same time.

“Well, that’s weird,” Father Nelson laughed.

Confused, they all reached for their phones.

Each, surprisingly, had a text.

The same text from the same phone number.

“It’s my parents’ cell number, again,” Michael stated, surprised.

THIS IS ONLY THE BEGINNING . . . DEATH IS COMING . . . HAVE A NICE EVENING, BOYS :-)

All three men looked up in confused horror.

Freeman turned, looking out of his office window.

A raven glared up at him.

“Green Lake” Episode 1 scene 5 “The Vision”

Fri ,17/08/2012

Episode 1: Scene 5

The Vision

 

Sheriff Freeman arrived at the Barrett farmhouse. The yellow police tape was still surrounding the scene of the crime, but nobody was in sight. He walked up to the door and looked at the bullet hole that went through the front window.

“What could have been so damn bad?” he mused, fingering the broken glass. “What?”

Freeman took the police tape down and entered the house.

A cold feeling came over him; he reached into his pockets and pulled out a bag of Chips Ahoy cookies. He was addicted to the damn things, and found, to his surprise, that he thought clearer when consuming them.

The house was quiet, but the noise it was giving off was almost deafening. Freeman stood in the living room, looking down at the blood that covered the carpet, wondering what made Joe snap and kill his wife.

He found it hard to swallow his first cookie.

The phone rang and Freeman went to the kitchen to answer it.

When he picked it up, there was a disturbing silence on the other end.

“Hello? . . . Hello? . . . Is anybody there?”

Nothing.

A “pinging” sound buzzed within his head. The noise in the house was getting louder.

“Oh, God,” he moaned, blinking his eyes, fighting what was happening. “Not again. Please!”

Freeman felt an incredible agony flash through his body, and grabbed his head in pain. The force was so powerful that it caused him to fall to his knees.

“What’s happening to me?” he whispered.

He knew.

He had always tried his best to ignore these “things” when they happened.

The visions were returning to him.

“You said they would never return to me,” the sheriff said to no one in general.

He saw a red house on fire. Not the Barrett house, but a much older one. Bigger. From an earlier period than the Barrett’s. The home was completely engulfed in flames. People screamed, at the top of their lungs, trying to escape, but all burned. No matter the steps anyone took, the flames would not stop. The fire got hotter and larger, burning the structure to the ground. The sheriff could sense that his vision was taking place in a simpler time. The volunteer fire fighters looked like those in the movies, which told of turn of the century communities, where all took responsibility for service and safety. Back when the law worked for the innocent and not the protection of the guilty.

“Stop it!” he demanded.

The vision became clearer.

He saw a child’s face screaming at him from one of the windows of the house. Tiny hands beat against unyielding glass, demanding a rescue—none came. Boy or girl, he could not tell. Flames drenched the child, allowing the telltale clues of hair and detail to become buried in a curtain of flames. The child broke the glass, finally, reaching a bloodied and steaming hand out onto an uncaring world. The small soul turned into a ball of energy that shot out and up into the sky. Like lightning, the sheriff saw the energy ignite the sky.

Without warning, the earth rained blood down upon all who cared to witness.

The fire, consuming all, continued.

Freeman shook cobwebs out of his mind, and wiped prophecy from his eyes, listening to the ringing of the telephone.

“Hello?” Freeman stated, picking up the phone again.

Still there was nothing.

“HELLO!” he shouted, making damn sure that whoever was on the other end of the line could hear him.

Someone cleared their throat.

Was it . . . a woman?

Freeman wasn’t quite that sure.

“The time has come,” the voice explained, monotone in its delivery. “I have given you back your ability to see the un-seeable. I give this to you only to witness, since you can’t stop what is coming. You will understand everything shortly. Remember the child. Remember that which you will have to . . . sacrifice. You are the hand!”

Freeman pulled himself up, straightening. He was almost fully recovered from his frightening vision, and had no sense of humor for whoever was on the other end of this crazy conversation. This was police business, after all!

“Who the hell is this?” he demanded. He was surprised to find his hands shaking.

The voice went silent.

Nothing but dead air.

“You think this is some kind of game? Who the hell is this?”

Freeman hung up the phone and got out his cell.

“You want to be an asshole? Well, so can I!”

The sheriff called his office.

“Yeah! Get me Doug!” he demanded, yelling into his cell. “Doug! Listen, I need you to run a trace on a number that just called the Barrett home. I need this ASAP. Call the Judge and tell him that someone just called here and we need a court order to get the records from the phone company. I think they called twice, but only spoke once. So whatever you’re doing drop it and get on this.”

On the other end, Doug sounded concerned. Freeman could hear the boy biting his fingernails.

“Okay, boss. Everything. You all right?”

“I’m good, but something strange is going on and I don’t like it. I’ll be back soon.”

“Okay, see you soon.”

Both hung up about the same time. Freeman felt a little guilty putting the “creep” into the young man, but there were answers to discover here, and he knew that Doug was the only one capable of answering them.

The feelings started to boil.

Freeman was pissed and slammed his hand down on the kitchen counter. The damn thing broke like a piece of glass.

“Oh, shit,” the sheriff said, pulling his hand back in surprise.

He picked up a piece of the kitchen counter and it crumbled in his hand like it was made out of sand.

“What the hell?” he whispered, allowing the tiny fragments of the counter to fall from his fingers onto the kitchen floor.

He grabbed onto a portion of the counter that was still connected to the wall and it broke off in his hand. The house was dying from the inside out.

“This cannot be happening!”

Freeman used his index finger and hit the wall where the phone hung.

His finger went through the wall like a piece of paper. Hollow.

The phone fell; bringing down with it a substantial part of the wall.

“What the fuck?” Freeman said, talking to himself.

Freeman’s heart skipped a beat when his cell phone started to ring. The theme song for “COPS” told him the caller was Doug.

“Freeman.”

“Boss we have a problem,” Doug said on the other line. His tone did not fill the sheriff with any kind of immediate hope. “There is a major fire on Willow Road, 2335 Willow Road. It is the home of Frank and Anne Goodwin. The fire department said that it was completely destroyed when they got there and they couldn’t do anything. They’re working on putting it out right now, thought you might want to run over there.”

It took Freeman a few seconds to respond.

“Thanks, Doug. I’ll head over now. Find me Ralph Henry’s phone number and call me back, I need to talk to him. Also did you get a hold of the judge?”

“Yes. I called his office and his secretary is getting him. I guess he’s on the golf course today. I’ll call you back with Ralph’s number, but why?”

Freeman started to wipe himself off. He was covered with sand.

“I’ll tell you later. Just call me back, okay?”

Freeman hung up the phone before Doug had a chance to respond. Sometimes, his “Beaver Cleaver” tone drove the man crazy.

Ralph Henry owned an auto body shop in town, but way before he bought it, the man used to build houses for a living. Ralph personally built at least a hundred homes surrounding Green Lake, and was the only soul he knew who could shed some light or logic on what was happening at the Barrett house. He needed to know if this was all connected with the crime. Could there have been an unknown chemical reaction that caused two logical people to be part of such an illogical act? Stranger things had happened in this world.

Now, he needed to focus on the fire.

“Fire.” Freeman said with realization.

His vision.

“Was that what I saw?” he asked himself.

He knew the Goodwins. Not on a personal level, but in a small community it was tough not to at least be familiar with most everyone in town.

Freeman took out his cell phone.

“Doc, I need to see you. Can we meet later?”

Doc Holder’s voice crackled on the other end of the line. The man sounded as if the sheriff had awakened him.

“Yea. When, Sheriff? Did something happen, is this an emergency?”

Freeman did not know what to say. Fuck yes. This was an emergency. However, he didn’t want to sound crazy. He had been seeing the Doc for a couple of years, dealing with what he thought was his personal failure ending up sheriff in his hometown. He had planned for bigger and better things, went out into the world to acquire all these fancy skills, only to end up back in Green Lake. Just ten blocks down from where he had started.

But after seeing a cloudy picture of a murder/suicide, which happened to come true (he didn’t tell anybody about that one yet) and now seeing the fire, and the phone call, he needed either to change his brand of cookies or talk to someone he could trust.

“Not an emergency, but I need to talk and get your professional opinion.”

“Okay, how about in an hour? My office?”

“Okay, I’ll be there. Thanks.”

Freeman closed up the house and headed out to his car.

Guest Blogger Dave Thomas “7 books to read before the end of summer”

Fri ,17/08/2012

7 Suspenseful Books to Read Before End of Summer

While summer is flying by at its normally quick pace, that doesn’t mean you don’t have time to read some suspenseful books before thoughts turn to autumn and fallen leaves.

Whether it is kicking back in the hammock or putting your feet up on the front porch or in the sand, summer is a great time to relax with a good book or two.

Without further ado, here are some books that will keep you on the edge of your seat, wherever that may be the remainder of the summer:

1. Dublin Dead, Gerard O’Donovan – In this Irish thriller, a sequel to O’Donovan’s debut The Priest (2010), journalist Siobhan Fallon has a hunch that there is something not quite right regarding a millionaire estate agent’s suicide, but the official investigation is cursory: Dozens of people who work in the Irish property industry have committed suicide in the recent years, so what’s one more?

A female reporter who gets the scoop no matter what it takes, Siobhan investigates the estate agent’s life and ultimate demise. Meantime, her friend DI Mike Mulcahy is trying to solve the murder of a noted Dublin gangster in Spain. The twists and turns here come from attempting to work out the  inevitable tie between the two deaths.

2. Blue Monday, Nicci French – This is the first in a new series of psychological thrillers unveiling an interesting London psychotherapist. In this book, Frieda Klein is a solitary, incisive psychotherapist who spends her sleepless evenings strolling along the ancient rivers that have been forced underground in modern London.

The kidnapping of five-year-old Matthew Farraday provokes a national outcry and a frantic police search. Meantime, Frieda cannot get the fact out of her head that one of her patients has been having dreams in which he has a desire for a child, a red-haired child he can describe in flawless detail, a child the spitting image of Matthew. As a result, Frieda finds herself in the center of the investigation, serving as the unwilling assistant of the chief inspector.

3. Catch Me: D.D. Warren #6, Lisa Gardner – Readers will discover that the relentless Boston investigator must solve a coldly calculated murder prior to it happening. As the plot evolves, a lone woman outside D.D.’s latest crime scene startles her with a remarkable proposition: Charlene Rosalind Carter Grant thinks she will be murdered in four days. And she requests Boston’s top detective handle the death investigation. Is Charlene really in danger, or is she keeping a secret that could end up being the greatest threat of all?

4. All I Did Was Shoot My Man: Leonid McGill #4, Walter Mosley - As you pick up and delve into this mystery, you will discover that Leonid is trapped between his sins of the past and an all-too-vivid present. Seven years ago, Zella Grisham returned home to discover her man, Harry Tangelo, in bed with her friend. The weekend prior, $6.8 million had been stolen from Rutgers Assurance Corp., whose offices are across the street from where Zella was employed. Zella does not remember shooting Harry, but she didn’t deny it at the same time. The district attorney was leaning towards calling it temporary insanity – until authorities found $80,000 from the Rutgers heist hidden in her storage space. For reasons kept to him, Leonid McGill is convinced of Zella’s innocence. But as he begins his investigation, his life starts to fall apart…

5. What Doesn’t Kill You: Catherine Ling #2, Iris Johansen – Abandoned on the streets of Hong Kong as a child, Catherine Ling only knows one thing: survival. As a teen, she came under the tutelage of a secretive male known only as Hu Chang – a skilled assassin and master poisoner. As a young woman, she was recruited by the CIA, and now she is regarded as one of their top operatives.

When her old friend Hu Chang creates something deadly and completely untraceable, the hunt is on to be the first to locate it. With rogue operative John Gallo also in the chase, Catherine finds herself fighting against a group so villainous and a man so evil that she may not survive the game to protect those most important to her.

6. Dead and Alive, John Richmond – In this thriller, young Will Tomlinson strolled into his apartment one June afternoon and discovered a dead man on his couch. Will did not know the dead man, or how he had ended up in his apartment. Most importantly, Will is befuddled as to how the man died…so starts the mystery.

As if he does not have enough on his hands, Will is then pursued by a relentless homicide inspector, Lupo. With questions to be answered, Will begins his own investigation into the mysterious murder, with the aid of his long-lost childhood friend, Belew. As Lupo turns up the heat on Will, he sees his personal and professional life suffer as a result. Ultimately, what Will discovers at the center of this mystery will change his own life forever after.

7. Black List, Brad Thor – Readers will quickly discover that somewhere in the far reaches of the U.S. government is a deeply protected list. Members of Congress are prohibited from seeing it – only the President and a secret team of advisers have such privileges. Even more intriguing, once your name is on the list, it doesn’t come off…until you’re deceased. Now, someone has added counterterrorism operative Scot Harvath’s name to that deadly list. As a result, Harvath must get away from the teams dispatched to kill him long enough to untangle who has targeted him and why he is on that list to being with.

For those needing some quiet moments away from the hustle and bustle of daily life, reading one or all of these mysteries should make your summer even hotter.

About the author: With 23 years of experience as a writer, Dave Thomas covers a wide array of topics from backgroundchecks to the latest books and movies to add to your collection.